On the edge of the Romanian wilderness, one woman flees the secrets that haunt her lover....

When four London Seasons fail to find her a suitable match, Alcyone Carter does the unthinkable and treks across Europe to marry a foreign nobleman she's never met.  But on her wedding night, she discovers that her handsome, enigmatic husband is not the man he claims to beand when a more sinister secret emerges, she escapes from his estate into the darkness rather than live a lie with a man she feels she can never know.

Ignited by his desire and his pride, Dumitru Constantinescu, Count Severinor, risks everything to follow Alcy from the depths of the Romanian forests into the decadent heart of Istanbul.  It is there that they will become unwilling pawns in a game that forces them to confront the sensual passion they've discoveredand the dire threat that could cost them their lives.

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"A lush, erotic historical Gothic romance with just the right dark and mysterious hero and a strong heroine who can match him." — Karen Harbaugh

"Envelops the reader in an atmosphere of mystery and sensuality." — A Romance Review

"Intelligent.  Passionate.  Filled with dark secrets and illuminating love.  This is what romance is all about!" — Robin Schone

   

  

CHAPTER ONE

Alcyone Carter was frightened.

She sat stiffly on the sway-backed mule, her hands clutching the pommel so tightly that her fingers had long ago gone from cramping to agony to final, blessed numbness. The reins she had no use for, and so they hung slack, slapping gently against her mount's neck with every steady step as it allowed itself to be drawn onward by the lead rope that stretched taut into the fog. Only that rope and the occasional, muffled clop of a hoof assured Alcy that her invisible guide was still there ahead of them, and only blind, desperate hope allowed her to believe that he could have any idea where they were going.

Around her, the world closed in, as small and featureless as the inside of an egg. Her feet were swallowed in the swirling mist, and even her hands, scarcely two feet from her face, were shrouded. The few feeble rays of sun that penetrated the thick blanket were bounced around until they became a thin, even light, flattening shadows and erasing all sense of depth.

The sound of whispered prayers in French and the rattle of rosary beads grated from behind her like the dry scratchings of an insect's legs. Celeste, her lady's maid, had been terrified of the mules even without the danger of the precipitous drop on one side of the narrow trail that had been the last thing they had seen before the fog enveloped them. Now, she was nearly hysterical.

Alcy found herself split between annoyance and envy, weary of her maid's moaning litany and yet wishing that she, too, could bury her mounting anxiety in histrionics. She felt utterly powerless, and to make matters worse, she knew she looked a fright. She had worn her riding habit for six days straight, and even Celeste's nightly efforts could not keep the delicate gray silk and brilliant gold braid from showing the stains of mud and damp, the wrinkles of too much wear between ironings. The dress had been created for civilized two-hour jaunts in a well tended park, not an endless journey through the wilderness. Alcy’s hair had fared little better in the wind and damp, and she felt its rebellion from its pins and ribbons as a personal insult.

"How much farther?" Alcy called out in German to their guide. Her voice pierced the dead fog stridently, unnaturally loud. She tried again, attempting for insouciance. "When will we arrive? You said it was the last day."

"Now, fräulein." The reply drifted through the whiteness.

Abruptly, Alcy sensed an openness around them, as if they had risen beyond the rocky slope that had sheltered them on one side as they climbed. Had they reached the mountain's crest? 

As if in answer, a breeze pushed through the sullen air, tattering the fog into long streamers that fluttered like a thousand veils. The guide became visible in the shredding mist, and Alcy watched him pull his mount to a stop. Her own mule sauntered a few more steps before halting nose-to-tail behind him.

"Why are we stopping?" she asked, shoving her unruly hair from her eyes and hating the nervous shrillness of her tone.

"Be patient," the man said impassively. He had answered every question impassively for the last six days.

Alcy had no choice, and so she sat and waited, straining through the mist for some hint of what lay before them. The breeze quickened to a wind, and through the rapidly clearing air, she traced the trail with her gaze as it sloped down until it was swallowed where the rocky upthrust gave way to the dark tangle of forest. From their vantage, she could look out over the saw-toothed tops of the trees and see the opposite side of the valley...

...and the castle that loomed above it. It stood at the edge of a cliff, only a little higher than the ridge crest where they rested, iron-gray and sheer-walled, its toothy crenellations smiling indifferently down on the forest below. It looked as ancient as the mountains, and as cold.

"Castle Vlarachia," the guide said. And then he nudged his mule back into a walk as Celeste's prayers crescendoed in panic.

Castle Vlarachia. It seemed impossible to Alcy that she was facing it at last, which was odd because her father's scheme had struck her as eminently sensible and achievable when he had suggested it nearly a year ago. The plan had still seemed practical and — Alcy was honest with herself — rather romantic when she exchanged a series of shy letters with the man she came to know as János as her father quietly dealt with the financial details in precisely the way she had laid out. A bridal portion was secured in her name, and the rest of her dowry was given over to the baron in a trust upon the condition of their marriage, and with that security, she had given herself over to fantasy. So when the moment came, her long trip from England to Vienna and down the Danube had possessed the glitter of dazzling, girlish dreams, unshaken by the ugly mundanities of transcontinental travel yet more genuine to her than anything in her life until that point.

But then the fog had risen from the river as the barge reached Orsova, wrapping Alcy in its insulating sense of unreality, and since the moment she had stepped onto the quay there, she had not quite been able to make herself believe that anything she experienced was truly happening. The strange entourage awaiting her had only reinforced that sensation. 

Someone will meet you at the docks, János' last letter had promised her. And someone had. What János failed to warn her was that her escort would not be a liveried coachman and footmen to take her on a brief carriage ride to a manor overlooking the town but a strange, ruffianish pair who would lead her far into the depths of the wilderness on the back of a mule with her baggage strapped onto four camels — four actual camels! — behind her. It was a shame Aunt Rachel had taken ill and had to be left with her maid and manservant in Vienna: Despite her own anxiousness, Alcy sorely missed seeing her reaction to that. The camel driver spoke no language with which she was familiar, and her guide seemed to know a mere smattering of German, which he employed only grudgingly and usually to assure her that they were close to their destination — very close.

And now she faced it.

Alcy sank into a daze of confounded thoughts and emotions as they plunged once again into forest, feeling for the first time uncertain about the wisdom of her agreement to the scheme. Reflexively, she raised a hand to her necklace, her fingers curling around the miniature that hung from it. She had spent so much time gazing at that pendant over the past four months that she could now call to mind a perfect replica of the man in its portrait. In England, she had thought the gentle, blurring glow around János' golden features to be rather dashing, but now its imprecision haunted her with grotesque possibilities. 

She pushed the image away and mentally paged through the affectionate yet distant letters he had sent her instead, trying to find reassurance in the shape of the underlying personality in his carefully respectful phrases. She was so preoccupied that her mule came to a stop before she realized they had somehow circled the cliff and arrived at the castle.

The trail had widened to a road only to be swallowed by an arching maw in the castle’s massive barbican. Directly in front of them, the gates stood shut tight as if to ward off an invading army, the oak blackened with age — and perhaps boiling pitch, too, that had splashed against the wood as it rained down upon the enemy. The vast curtain wall stretched away on either side of the gateway's towers, gray and bleak under the shroud of clouds that smothered the sky. 

Were they just going to stand there until someone inside noticed them? Alcy wondered as her guide stared in mute patience at the battered oak. Just as she was beginning to think she ought to call a greeting, the gates started to creak open. 

It was only then that Alcy remembered how frightful she must look, how pale and travel worn with her windblown hair and mud-stained skirts. I cannot go in now! She felt the first, fluttery stirrings of panic. However else she might be lacking as a lady, she knew she could at least look the part if given a chance, and all her future happiness might depend upon this initial meeting.

"Wait," she hissed to the guide. 

He showed no signs of having heard her. 

"I must refresh myself," she pressed on, a trifle more desperately. "I must change clothes, arrange my hair — "

By then it was too late. The gate had swung wide, revealing the servants who opened it — and beyond, a crowd of people who stared at her with wide eyes.

The guide entered, and her mule followed obediently behind. A broad, sere ward stretched out between the curtain wall and a massive square keep that stood proud of the warren of low gray additions sprawling from it in all directions. The space was filled with men, women, and children, and some automatic, distant part of Alcy's mind began to franticly add them up, losing its place only after it had passed two hundred.

Alcy sat ramrod-straight on her mule, trying to project the cool, calm air of a born lady when she had never felt more like a tradesman's dressed-up daughter, her heart pounding wildly in her chest. For some reason, she had not thought of the local peasants and servants beyond the vague idea that there must be some — and if she had, she never would have imagined she would have to confront them all like this, at the moment of her arrival, nor that they would survey her so weighingly. If she'd considered the locals at all, she would have envisioned them clothed in wholesome English calico dresses and decently tailored wool coats and trousers. But the men wore strange, scoop-necked waistcoats with oriental decorations under baggy overcoats, and the women's costumes struck her Leeds-bred eyes as tremendously exotic. Arches of white linen framed the women's faces, and wide aprons of the same material covered their dresses, both brightly embroidered in angular patterns that seemed almost barbaric. Alcy imagined 
she saw in their faces traces of the horse nomads that had swept through the region centuries ago — that they truly were the children of the Huns as many of the Hungarians claimed to be.

Before Alcy even consciously registered the pull, her gaze was dragged away from the gathered peasants to a lone man who stood to one side, apart from the crowd. The sense of separateness that surrounded him was far more profound than could be credited to such sublunary matters as physical distance from the others or a difference in dress. It was rooted in who he was, what he was — and Alcy knew him to be the castle's lord.

He wore a coat cut in the height of French fashion, though from four or five years past, with matching trousers and a wine-red waistcoat. The tailoring was exquisite, cut to display a powerful frame, broad shoulders narrowing to lean hips, the muscles of his wide-planted legs apparent even through the cloth of his trousers. His body sent an instinctive reaction through her before she had even made out any details of his face, a reaction she had felt before when suddenly meeting eyes with a surprisingly handsome man, but this time it was compounded by the knowledge that there would soon be far more between them than idle glances. For Baron Benedek János was soon to be her husband.

Forcing her eyes upward as her guide pulled them to a stop, Alcy discovered that the man was inexplicably bareheaded, his chin shaven and hair worn long over his collar like a romantic poet from a generation past. For an instant, he seemed like the young Apollo of his miniature, with his face turned into a wind that ruffled his pale hair. But then he turned to look at her, and she realized that his locks were not golden at all but silver, shot through with streaks of the darkest sable and surrounding an unlined visage that could be any age between twenty and fifty, his features strong yet more smooth than rugged and his eyes possessing a slight slant of the East that, with his hair, gave him an otherworldly cast.

Alcy suddenly knew why the women of the old ballads always allowed themselves to be carried away by their faerie lovers. The man's gaze narrowed as it swept across her, and she felt her skin prickle with heat in its wake, the sensation waking an alarming sense of brazenness within her.

Celeste, who had gone silent, suddenly began to pray again in earnest, and out of the corner of her eye, Alcy saw her cross herself as if the man were a demon come to steal her soul. Steal it? I'd like to see the woman who could deny him if he asked.

The baron — she could not call this man by the Christian name she had been using freely in her letters for the last four months — strode toward them then, and Alcy sat frozen, watching him in dry-mouthed fascination as her body sang in awareness of every step. He moved with a kind of reined-in energy that she had never encountered before, riveting in its promise of excitement. His eyes were a cold, pale blue under the dark slashes of his brows, but they danced with a sense of self that she might even be tempted to call charisma, as trite as such a word seemed. She could not begin to sort through the thoughts that flickered within their depths as he approached, so quickly did they come and go, but it was clear he made no attempt to hide them. He was a man not accustomed to concealing his feelings, whatever they were — one who had never had the need. Alcy envied him suddenly and sharply.

Baron Benedek stopped at the side of her horse and grasped her stirrup, and she realized that he meant for her to dismount. Alcy swung stiffly down from the saddle, her stomach fluttering with nervousness and involuntary attraction.

The baron caught her elbow before her feet touched the hard-packed earth, and she felt a small, twisting pleasure deep in her center even though the thickness of his glove and her sleeve still separated them. His action might have been to steady her, but he used the motion to place her arm around his and pin it neatly to his side.

Alcy had the insane impression that he thought she might flee and was preemptively preventing any chance at escape. She mentally reviewed the miles of tangled trails they had traversed over the past six days. Flee to where? How? And what would make him think that she might want to? The thoughts had a fine edge of hysteria.

His teasing eyes belying the gravity of his expression, the baron spoke quickly in some language that Alcy could not understand. She blinked and stared at him dumbly, letting the silence stretch out until she felt obliged to give some sort of reply or risk the appearance of rudeness. She cleared her throat, feeling heat creep up her cheeks as she remembered the many demurely tender letters she had sent him since their engagement had been formalized. Now, in his presence, those missives seemed impossibly naïve, from another life, and she could not think of where to begin.

"Herr Benedek, I presume?" she asked tentatively in the schoolbook Standard German her governess had taught her.

The baron's eyes narrowed, and Alcy feared she read a hint of contempt in their glittering depths. "In this part of the world, a noble is addressed by his full title," he replied in the same language. "A baron is never just 'lord.'"

Shamed at her mistake, Alcy swallowed hard against her roiling stomach. She had learned that Hungarians used their family names before their Christian; why had she not thought to research their titles as well? "Baron Benedek, then?"

"As you say." The words were without inflection. He looked her up and down again, possessively, assessingly, and she stiffened under his scrutiny as she felt her cheeks heat even more, though now their warmth had nothing to do with embarrassment. "Welcome to the castle, Miss Carter. I am sure you are curious about your new home. I will arrange for a tour of the premises later, but right now we are wanted in the chapel. The priest has been waiting for some time." He flashed her a toothy smile before beginning to walk toward the nearest wing of the structure that sprawled from the hub of the keep.

"The priest?" she blurted, stumbling after him to keep from being dragged. He couldn't mean for them to be married now. She had only just met the man. She must recover from her journey and spend time getting to know him better, and even then there were so many preparations to be made — people to invite, wedding entertainments to arrange, and her first parties to plan for the neighboring nobility and gentry, not to mention the travel arrangements for their trip to the glitter and whirl of the imperial court in Vienna. It didn't even make sense that she would want such a thing. After all, he must want to get to know her, and before the wedding could even be countenanced, she must convert to the Roman faith. 

Wait — that was it! The priest must be ready for her Confirmation. But she was certain that she must first be catechized or something — surely there was more to it than could be done in a single afternoon.

"Why should we delay our happy union a moment longer than we must?" Baron Benedek said as if he could imagine no difficulty with the prospect.

He did mean their wedding! Alcy's mouth opened, but no sound came out.

The baron continued blithely, "After all, mine is a bachelor household, and it would be most improper for you to stay the night if we were not yet wed." He gave her a raking look. “Speaking of impropriety, what has become of your chaperone?”

“Aunt Rachel’s gout became unbearable, and she was forced to remain in Vienna with her cousin while I continued on alone.” Alcy attempted to sound appropriately meek, but his words made her resentful, for he should be the one defending unorthodox behavior, not her. “I have my lady’s maid as company instead. Surely, since we are betrothed, her presence is sufficient.”

Just then, they passed through wide double doors in the end of the wing, entering a vast Romanesque hall. She was given no time to take it in, though, for the baron did not even slacken his pace in response to her hesitation, and she had to run a couple of steps to come even with him again.

“All the more reason for us to wed immediately,” he said.

"But we can't do that!" Alcy snapped. The man gave her a sideways, patiently inquiring look, and she felt her face flame scarlet and fumbled for something less blatantly contradictory to say. "I must at least put on my wedding dress," she blurted. The protest was nonsensical, and she blushed even harder as she realized what she had said, but it was the first coherent, nonaccusatory phrase she managed to pull from the welter of confused objections that tumbled through her mind.

"You may wear it for our marriage portrait," the baron assured her in the voice of an adult pacifying a child. 

Alcy stifled a surge of simultaneous irritation and chagrin — irritation at his tone and chagrin at how shallow and vain she must have sounded to him. She took a steadying breath and seized upon a less frivolous impediment. "But I am still an Anglican. I must convert before we can legally be wed."

"Do not worry," the man said as they entered a narrow, shadowy corridor. "The priest will deal with that first. It will only be a matter of a few minutes." He gave her a sideways look, and once again the directness of those blue eyes stirred a shivering warmth deep inside her. "Surely four months is an engagement long enough for anyone's propriety. In England, it would be far in excess of the norm, would it not?"

"Yes," honesty made Alcy agree, but she could not keep back the words that followed, implacably logical and thoroughly argumentative. "And yet this is hardly a usual English marriage, for we don't even know one another."

"Do months of correspondence mean so little to you, my little bird?" he asked. The endearment was straight from his letters, a play on the meaning of her name, but now the phrase had a sardonic twist.

"No. No, of course not," Alcy said, straightening her shoulders even as she grew more confused about exactly what this man meant and what he intended. She felt as if she were engaged in some sort of battle with him, though for what, she couldn't say. She also felt, helplessly, as if he were cheating, changing meanings and twisting customs to suit himself, and yet she knew no acceptable way to call him on it.

"Good," the baron said with satisfaction, and Alcy knew she was beaten.

They turned down another near-lightless corridor, and Baron Benedek switched languages as he spoke again. This time, Alcy recognized the patterns of the Hungarian boatmen's speech.

"I do not speak Magyar," she protested in German.

Baron Benedek made a noise halfway between a grunt of confirmation and a snort and changed languages again — and this time, she could decipher the words.

"Can you understand this, then?" he had asked as he guided her down another passageway.

"Only with difficulty," she replied in Attic Greek, markedly different from the modern vernacular he used.

He nodded. "And Russian?" he asked in that language, of which she scarcely knew twenty words.

"Nyet." Was he testing her? Alcy wondered. To what end? And what answer did he want to hear? Belatedly, she considered that the baron might not care for a wife who knew more than the obligatory French, the German they had exchanged letters in, and perhaps a smattering of Latin, but it was too late now to pretend ignorance.

"French?" he asked, switching as if he'd read her mind.

"But of course."

He changed to another language, and then another and another, and Alcy merely shook her head helplessly as she did not recognize a word of any of them. The baron stopped without warning, and Alcy looked away from him, startled, to discover that the corridor reached a dead end at a dark, polished door in front of them.

"The chapel," Baron Benedek explained, in German again. He looked at her for a long moment, but the shadows of the unlit passageway were too deep for Alcy to read his expression. Still, his close attention was enough to send an edgy warmth buzzing through her, the sensation both heady and dangerous. 

"I understand that it is customary for an Englishman to kiss his intended after she accepts his marriage proposal," he said, with a dangerously playful note in his voice that seemed somehow out of tune with the deliciously dark intent in his eyes. "There has been somewhat of a delay in our particular case, but I believe that it is a custom worth respecting."

For half a second, Alcy just stared at him, uncomprehending. Then he loosed his hold on her arm, slipped one arm around her back and the other behind her head, and pulled her toward him. Only then did she realize that he actually meant to kiss her — truly kiss her. 

She tried to jerk back automatically, but he held her too tightly. Why resist? she asked herself abruptly. There was surely nothing improper in it, as they were minutes from being wed, and yet as he drew her near, such a hot confusion of sensation overcame her that she could not quite believe that it wasn't wicked, after all.

Their bodies met, the baron drawing her firmly against his hard stomach and chest so that her skirts were crushed against him, and his head began to descend. Light-headedly, she watched his face grow nearer, nearer, as her breath quickened and her heart raced. And then — his mouth found hers.

Polite, some distant part of her mind labeled that gentle contact, but it did not stay so for long. A rush of fire surged though her at that first brushing pressure, and she felt both heavy and weightless at once, her knees bending as she leaned against him, letting her head tilt back in invitation.

Which he took.

His gentle kiss hardened suddenly, and her lips parted eagerly at his tongue's urging. His touch inside her mouth was slick and firm, shockingly intimate, and the fire inside her roared up, flushing her skin with heat and making her head spin. When he finally pulled away, she wasn't ready, and she stumbled back, gasping for breath and blinking at him in the dimness that somehow seemed suddenly far too bright.

Alcy thought, belatedly, that she might have shocked and repelled her future husband, but when she met his gaze, his expression held more pleasure than even surprise. He raised a hand to her face, brushing the back of his gloved knuckles softly down her cheek.

"It seems that we have both gotten more than we expected," he said softly, cryptically, his voice roughened in a way that made Alcy shiver. He gave her a critical look. “Take off your hat and shoes.” 

Alcy gaped at his request — demand, really — but despite his arched brow, there was no sign that he was making a joke at her expense. “Why ought I do that, sir?” she managed.

There was a knowing edge to his smile. “I see into your wicked mind, Miss Carter, but I assure you that I have only the most honorable intentions. It is necessary for the conversion ceremony.”

She hesitated for a moment but could think of no reasoable objection. She loosened the ribbon on her bonnet and dropped it onto the floor. Carefully, she hitched up the hem of her skirt just enough to reach the top of her ankle-high boots. She made a valiant attempt to unfasten the row of tiny buttons with her gloved fingers without toppling over or exposing more of her leg than was necessary, but the layers of petticoats kept sliding down around her hands, and she wobbled dangerously as she battled them and the stiff leather.

“Allow me.”

Alcy looked up into Baron Benedek’s slanting, ice-blue eyes. There was a dangerous glint in them, somewhere between humor and seduction. 

“Oh, no,” she protested automatically, her face heating. “I couldn’t allow you to do that.”

“And why not?” he asked in a tone that made her heart race and her stomach plummet. “It isn’t like I won’t be removing far more than your shoes tonight.”

That flabbergasted her long enough that he dropped to one knee and firmly grasped her ankle before she could summon the proper “My dear sir!” in remonstrance. By then, she was left with no alternative but to fight him or allow him to assist her, and common sense told her which would be wiser. She clamped her lips tight around a tart rejoinder and straightened stoically, telling herself that she would tolerate such treatment if she must in the name of peace. 

Except it seemed much less like toleration than a guilty sort of enjoyment, for despite the baron’s businesslike movements, Alcy could not help but be aware of the intimacy of a man’s touch where no man had ever touched her before, the cerebral realization stirring a distinctly physical reaction in her. The gentle pressure of his hand cradling the back of her ankle sent a buzz through her, tiny but too sharp to be ignored. He pulled off first one boot and then the other, and she almost yelped when, instead of rising, he slid his hands up her calf.

“What are you doing?” she demanded, tensed to jerk away.

“Your stockings must be removed as well,” he said calmly. He loosened the garter ribbons that tied behind her knee and gave her a look of counterfeit innocence that made her go suddenly breathless.

“I can do it quite well myself, thank you very much,” Alcy said. She had meant to snap, but the man rattled her, and the words came out without any conviction. Was he trying to seduce her, mock her, threaten her? She couldn’t tell what his intent was — in fact, she couldn’t even say for certain at that moment which of the three he was most successful in. Even as she protested, he rolled the fine silk of her stockings over her calf, his palms skating over the bare flesh of her leg as it was exposed. She steeled herself against the shiver that threatened to betray her.

Alcy knew he must now be far beyond the bounds of propriety in any Christian society. She forced herself to step out of his grasp as soon as he pulled her stocking free even though one traitorous part of her wanted nothing more than to luxuriate in the wicked sensations his touch stirred in her. Suppressing that urge, she bent to remove the second stocking herself as quickly as possible. Baron Benedek simply stood and leaned back against the corridor wall, his hands crossed over his chest in a manner she couldn’t help but think was smug. Pulling together the tattered remnants of her composure, she managed to say witheringly, “I hope you are quite finished now. If you think I will allow you to strip me naked here, you are very much mistaken.”

He pushed away from the wall as she straightened and gave him a look that she hoped was full of the greatest severity and disapproval.

He merely chuckled. “I had not planned to, but what an interesting idea. A shame we have no time for such diversions; the priest will grow impatient if we tarry much longer."

And then, without waiting for a response, he captured her arm in the crook of his elbow and opened the dark and gleaming door to the chapel.

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I was inspired by some of the research books I read about Venice to do a book set in the Balkans next.  It was a financially risky decisions, since it wasn't London or a creepy manor, but it was a great deal of fun to more so far afield of the usual romance stomping grounds. 

Chapter One

p. 1  Celeste - French lady's maids were truly a la mode several decades later, but Alcy is a bit ahead of her time.  While most lady's maids went by their surnames, French lady's maids were called by their first names.

p. 2  On the languages - The upper classes of Hungary and even Romania spoke German.  The other typical upper class Christian language of the Balkans was Greek, and some in Romania spoke Russian.  The liturgical language of Romania was Old Church Slavonic--related to Serbo-Croatian, etc., in the same sort of way that modern Italian is to Latin.  The language of the common people varied from place to place in the Balkans.  There were varieties of Magyar (in Hungary), Romanian, Greek, and Slavic languages.  These were largely unwritten from the Ottoman Conquest to the 19th century, and so there weren't clearly define languages, as they tended to change incrementally from village to village.  So village A might be mutually comprehensible with village B, and village B with C, but A might not be able to speak with C.  Turkish was another language of the lower classes, for the court and Moslem upper classes spoke Ottoman Turkish, which was so heavily influenced by Persian and Arabic that it was largely unintelligible to the lower classes, who were looked down upon by the Ottoman Turkish speakers.  Members of the court, if they learned a European language, were most likely to know French.  Modern Turkish has quite a few French loanwords--I once surprised a Turk into jaw-dropped silence by translating a very brief exchange for someone else because I understood enough of the French loanwords!

p. 6  I based Dumitru's looks on a ridiculously book-looking Russian baritone.  His outfit's French because that was when he was in France.


Chapter Two

p. 19 This is where the first of the very strong hints come that things aren't as they seem.

p. 21 In 19th-c England, only women wore the wedding band.

p. 22 Ce qui s'est passe, mademoiselle? - What happened?

p. 26 Yond Cassius, etc. - From Julius Cesar

p. 30 manticore - a mythical animal made of three different creatures put together

p. 30 Orsova - a real town!


Chapter Four

p. 49 Prince - Romania picked up the tradition from Russian/Ukrainian countries of allowing a very wide usage of the title Prince or Princess, the title going to all descendants of any degree.  So it is essentially meaningless.

Chapter Six

p. 49 Volynroskyj -The name is my own invention, but it follows the pattern of Ukrainian boyars.

p. 30 manticore - an mythical animal made of three different creatures put together

Chapter Seven

p. 82  R? rules - the R is quite wrong--it's supposed to be the symbol for real space, but oh, well.

p. 83  All the periodicals and books are real.

p. 84  extracomplex - They are now called hypercomplex numbers and were studied by a British mathematician at about this time period.  They were all the rage for a while as people thought they'd unlock endless possibilities--anyhow, they didn't, but they are extremely useful in electrical engineering.  They are accurately described here, and Alcy's solution for her mental problem is also completely valid.

p. 95  Maria Theresa thaler - the default currency of this region.

Chapter Eight

p. 99  The Cornish engine was one of the most popular steam engines of the period.  Adding a second cylinder in a second stage allows one to use more of the energy provided by the steam but, of course, adds to the complexity of the design.  Efficiency improves, but without a good design and excellent manufacturing, you can essentially double the complexity and therefore failure rate.

I still had the beginning writer's failing of explaining too much in this book, and it suffers for it.  *sigh*


Chapter Eleven

p. 134 Notation was exactly the reason for the difficulty with hypercomplex numbers.


Chapter Twelve

p. 143 Qui est-ce? - Who is it?

p. 151-152 This is a kind of metaphysical poetry paean, with a line from Donne included.  Couldn't be more appropriate.

Chapter Thirteen

p. 161  I looked up the width of the Danube at this point, as well as the depth, temperature, and current--and pictures to determine that correct color.  This is quite manageable for a horse.  Alcy's more frightened than the circumstances dictate.

p. 167  Hajduks - Hajduci, Hajduks, or Haiduks were bandits who were generally associated with and sheltered by local villages.  Depending upon the account, either they were brilliant freedom fighters fiercely protected by the peasantry or they were brutal thugs who terrorized the local populace into helping them and extorted from the locals while robbing and slaughtering travelers.  The most honest account seems to be generally between the two, and so I reflect that in the book.

Chapter Sixteen

The description of Belgrade, of the palace, of the prince, etc. are all as accurate as I could manage.  The Prince was a real historical character--and quite a piece of work.  His dirty dealings are historical.


Chapter Twenty

Mehmid Reshid Pasha wasn't actually in residence when this takes place--I simplified the real history here.  There was no beylerbey at that point in Sofia.

Chapter Twenty-Two

Alcy would never have really seen the sultan, but it would have spoiled the story for her not to see him.

Edmund really has a whole life--and many adventures--of his own.  Perhaps one day we'll see them.

This book really needed to be about twice the length.  I was WAY over page count already--hence the tiny font--but I do wish it could have been so much longer.  The end was dreadfully rushed, and many evens of their return were omitted.  There also wasn't room for a single subplot!  *sighs*

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Two Propositions

A short story that takes place before the book begins

Alcy stared at the stacks of dresses, folded neatly on the shelves of the open wardrobe. Her father had declared that in three days’ time, the family would be going to London for her fifth Season. She should pack. She should decide which dresses were still fashionable enough for a second year and which should be left behind, which of her dancing slippers and hats and gloves should be wrapped carefully and placed in her trunks.

But the truth was that she didn't care.

"Pack it all," she told her maid Celeste shortly, turning away from the frothy decadence of lace and silk, the most extravagant products of her father's looms.

She stared moodily out the window onto the street below. A puppet. That's what she was. A puppet in fancy dresses, made to curtsy clumsily and smile as she listened to the same inane gossip, dressed up with different names and different exclamations but still the same, the same, the same as last week and last month and last year. By halfway through her first Season, everyone had known that Alcy would find no society match. Oh, she was beautiful and rich enough to balance out her ignoble origins. But she was not sweet nor gently spoken nor able to feign interest in whose new coach cost 500 pounds or who was seen winking at whom over a fan. Everyone had known that she was a failure — everyone except her parents, who could not understand nor accept that no one else could see what they did in their only child. And so Alcy had continued the farce, every year more conscious of the tittering and the snubs, more acutely aware that she was becoming both a fixture and a standing joke, like mad old Lord Gunther or the eternal Miss Frye, who was well past forty but still dressed and giggled like a debutante.

A hansom cab rattled up the cobbled street below her. Alcy watched it dully, her stomach churning. It slowed — and stopped, right in front of their terrace house. Alcy frowned. Her father was at the factory today, and her mother kept visiting hours only once a week in Leeds. Who could it be?

A man stepped out from under the canopy. Despite the hat that obscured his face, Alcy broke into a grin. Ezekiel! He must be coming to see her about the new plans.

Muttering an excuse to her maid, Alcy ducked out of her rooms and into the corridor. A few short steps brought her to the school room, which had been given over years ago to her independent pursuits. Wide sheets of paper covered the central table, covered with Ezekiel's diagrams and computations in his angular Edinburgh-trained hand and her own annotations, changes, and suggestions in her own, more free-flowing script. She scooped up the papers in both arms and hurried back into the hallway just as she heard the door open in the front hall below. She trotted down the stairs as quickly as her full arms and long skirts would allow while Ezekiel greeted the parlor maid, reaching the bottom step just as he relinquished his hat and coat.

Ezekiel smiled when he saw her, his face falling into familiar, pleasant lines. Alcy beamed back.

"I told you I would have it." She nodded at the papers. "I present to you the plans for the first Trevithick-design compound steam engine!"

"Wonderful!" Ezekiel said, but there was a shadow of reservation in his warm brown eyes that Alcy was not accustomed to seeing. It made her pause for a moment, her smile faltering, but it disappeared as quickly as it had come. She shook her head, crediting it to her imagination.

"Here," she said, nudging the door to the dining room open with her foot. She entered and dropped the papers on the center of the gleaming mahogany table and began to arrange them. "I think we've finally developed a working model with this plan. You can check my last calculations, and then we can send them off to the forge. It should save my father enough in coal to pay for itself in the first year!"

"Alcy," Ezekiel said behind her, so quietly and strangely that she turned.

"Yes?" she asked.

He was standing in the doorway, still holding his gloves, turning then over and over in his machinery-roughened hands. "I heard you were leaving for another Season in London tomorrow," he said, his soft Scottish burr buzzing the Rs.

Alcy sighed, her excitement flowing out of her at that unwelcome reminder. Ezekiel knew how much she hated the balls and parties — the only person she had confided in besides Greta Roth, her ex-governess and best friend. "I fear that it has become an exercise in pointlessness by now. If you were busy, you needn't have come today. I would have sent you the plans before I left."

Ezekiel shrugged and stepped inside the room. Alcy was struck by how little he had changed since she had first met him nine years before — and how much she had. She'd been a scrawny thing of twelve then, with only a foot out of the nursery, and he'd been a brilliant engineer fresh from university, appearing without warning one week at the regular Sunday luncheon that her mother held for the engineers and shift managers and their wives.

Alcy had known immediately that Ezekiel Macgregor was different from the others. He smiled at her and talked to her, and though he tousled her hair, he had looked grave and considering when she had made a private, hesitant suggestion about the problem with the lift-gears on the jacquard looms he had mentioned over the meal instead of merely laughing at her as the others always did.

She had been wrong, that time, but her suggestion had be plausible enough that he had started to seek her out, to give her his designs to critique and to teach her what she didn't know of boilers and power looms, bobbin-winders and spinning machines until she was no longer his student but his partner, even more adept than he with the intricacies of mechanical design. He called her Alcy-girl, and she called him Uncle Ezekiel, and for one glorious, torturous summer when she was thirteen, she imagined herself madly in love with him.

That had passed, and though she had grown out of hair-tousling, they had each continued the fiction that it was perfectly ordinary for a young woman of considerable means and her father's most prominent engineer to be the easiest and most informal of friends.

"I haven't come here for the plans, Alcy," he said now, gravely. He paused, looked down at the gloves in his hands, and slipped them into his pocket. "I know you do not want to return to London."

"What is the point?" Alcy raised her eyebrows, smiling without much humor. "It is a waste of Papa's money and Mamma's time, and I will be miserable and bored stiff."

"I believe that I may have an...alternative that you will find amenable." He stepped forward, so that he was a scant two feet away from her. Alcy stared at him in confusion as he reached out and took one of her hands in both of his own. "I would not have dared to presume so high four years ago, or even only two, but time has given me reason to believe that my suit would not be looked upon with disfavor as I had once feared."

My suit? Alcy laughed unsteadily. "Ezekiel, I do not know what you are talking about." I hope I do not know what you are talking about. I think...

He sank to one knee, and for a moment, Alcy found herself staring at his thick thatch of light brown hair before he looked up at her again. "Alcyone Livia Horatia Carter, will you marry me?"

Alcy's face flamed, and for once, her tongue, so quick to speak when it should be silent, could manage nothing intelligible. "Ezekiel, I...I... Oh, for God's sake, please stand up!"

He remained stubbornly kneeling at her feet. Alcy tore her eye from his face to see the parlor maid standing slack-jawed in the entrance hall, staring at them. When she met Alcy's eye, the girl turned and fled, and Alcy wished she could do the same.

"Alcy," Ezekiel began, "I esteem you greatly. We have known each other for a long time. And in that time, I believe that I am not mistaken to say that a bond of mutual trust, of friendship, even of companionship has been built. It is upon these things that many strong marriages have been made."

"Yes," Alcy managed to get past the strangling tightness in her throat. "Yes, they have, but my parents — they want a peer. Nothing less that a peer." She looked at him helplessly.

"That is true," he said, still kneeling. Oh, God, why didn't he get up? He looked ridiculous there, made her feel ridiculous. It was like one of those girlhood daydreams twisted and turned into a horrible mockery of itself. "And yet I think that they might now be more open to a suit of a lesser man, if they know that he will pay them all due respect and will treasure their daughter and treat her with the kindness and indulgence that her spirit craves."

I don't want to be treasured, like a family’s useless heirloom, Alcy thought. I don't want to be indulged. "Please stand up. Stand up, and I will discuss this with you."

He stood, still keeping her hand earnestly enfolded in his. His hands were dry and cool, the scars and calluses rough against her smooth skin. "My current house is not as large as your father's, but when we marry, I am certain he will make me his full partner. You will not lack for anything."

She could live in Leeds. She would never again be forced to attend a ball, would never again have to sit through an interminable dinner party in which every conversation was either inane or political and all too familiar... When she went to London, it would be to visit the theater and the opera, to see the art galleries and the museums. And she would like with a man whom she honestly liked, which was more than she had expected, even if it wasn’t more than she had secretly hoped for...

Ezekiel was continuing. "Of course, some things would have to change, you understand. With the duties of marriage and keeping the house." He cleared his throat. "I will not be unreasonable. You know that I am not an unreasonable man. I will not expect you to give up you hobbies entirely, or anything of that sort, but as a married woman, with a husband and your own house, you would naturally have other concerns, other priorities." His eyes bore into her earnestly, asking her to understand.

Alcy felt a cold sickness through her belly. "My hobbies," she repeated dumbly.

"Yes, your diversions," Ezekiel agreed. "I will continue to consult with you on technical matters, of course. You skill is undeniable. But I expect that, with other occupations, your mathematical and philosophical pursuits will no longer consume quite so much of your days, and you will temper your natural enthusiasm so that you are a little more...restrained. Not that your exuberance isn’t charming, but you will be a matron, a properly married woman, you understand."

She stared at him — it seemed if he was a stranger, suddenly, as if she had never met him before in her life. "I will not need to spend so much time on frivolous diversions because I will be your wife," she said. "Because my days will be filled with making a home for you."

Ezekiel smiled, relaxing and squeezing her hand warmly. "And our children, of course. I knew that you would understand. You are a woman, after all, and have the natural feeling of one — "

"And all women live only to serve their husbands, do they not?" Her voice sounded queer in her own ears, and it must have seemed strange to Ezekiel, too, for his smile wavered. Alcy pulled her hand away, closing her eyes to shut out that pleasant, slightly anxious face. "You don't know me," she whispered. "You don't know me at all." Memories of her girlish dreams of just this moment came to her, and she couldn't contain the short, bitter laugh that bubbled up her throat. How different it had been in her dreams — how much better. She realized that tears were rolling down her cheeks, and knuckled then away roughly, opening her eyes to find that Ezekiel had retreated to the doorway again. No apologies, no impassioned pleas. She wouldn't have expected them, not from him.

"I believe that my hopes are not destined to be fulfilled," he said stiffly, pulling his gloves from his pocket.

Alcy bit her lip hard to get control before she trusted herself to speak. "A thousand times no, Ezekiel."

He shook his head in confusion. "But you are a woman. And we share mutual interests and respect."

"I am your Alcy-girl," Alcy returned. "I had thought you knew what that meant."

"Well, then." He cleared his throat. "I will bid you good day, Miss Carter."

Alcy's heart contracted at those words. She had lost more than a suitor — she had lost a friend. But all she said was, "Good day, Mr. Macgregor. I will send you the plans before I leave."

He nodded again and seemed about to say something, but then he turned on his heel and left, pushing through the hall and out the front door without bothering to retrieve his hat.

Alcy let out an unsteady breath and leaned against the dining room table for a moment. Just as she was about to push off, the front door swung open again, and the parlor maid reappeared to meet the arrival, giving Alcy a nervous look through the open doorway. She steeled herself, and it was with relief that she heard the rumbling tones of her father.

"Where is Alcy?" he asked the maid.

"In the dining room," Alcy called out, keeping her voice light with effort.

Her father's grizzled head appeared around the doorway. "Ezekiel almost knocked me over on the way out. He seemed in quite a hurry. Forgot his hat, too."

"I know. I think he was excited about our new plans," Alcy said, feeling horrible for lying but incapable of explaining the humiliating scene that had just transpired.

"Ah," he said cryptically, entering the room and pulling the door shut behind him. "I wanted to speak with you."

"Oh?" Alcy asked, her stomach sinking. Not about Ezekiel. It couldn’t be about Ezekiel.

"Yes. It seems that I do not talk often enough with my only child." Her father smiled with genuine affectionate.

"Oh," Alcy repeated, at a loss for what else to say.

"Your mother has told me that perhaps you do not wish to return to London." At Alcy's expression, he added, "Miss Roth told her — don't hold it against the young woman; I'm sure she has only your best interests at heart."

"It is only that I don't see any point in it," Alcy said, feeling like a traitor. "No one has wanted me for the past four years. Why will this one be any different?"

Her father puffed up with indignation. "Eligible bachelors should be standing in line for the chance to talk to you."

"Yes, well..." Alcy said uncomfortably. How could she tell him that the only invitations that she'd had were of the most physical kind — and all from men who had known her for less than ten minutes?

He sighed, deflating. "I know. I am sorry, Alcy. If I had known that London would be so unwelcoming — "

"It's not them. It's me," Alcy interrupted.

Her father stepped forward, taking her shoulders in his hands. "My dear Alcy, do not say that," he said firmly. "You are beautiful and kind and witty."

Impatient and uncharitable and unconventional, Alcy added silently. But she didn't bother to speak aloud. Her father couldn't understand, and if he could, he wouldn't believe.

"Now, I have an alternative that might be interesting to you," he continued. "I was hesitant to bring it up, but now that I know you hold out no hopes for London anymore..." The silent either hovered in the air. "Well, I don't see why I shouldn't at least see if you are amenable."

Amenable. That was the second time today she had heard that word. "I hope you are not going to suggest that I marry Ezekiel Macgregor."

"What? No," he father said, shaking his head even as he glanced out the front window toward where Ezekiel’s carriage had just left with a too-perceptive look. He cleared his throat. "I have been brought into contact with a nobleman — a baron — on the Continent through a mutual acquaintance. He is interested in an English bride."

"A rich English bride," Alcy supplied.

Her father shrugged. "Such is implicit. I would not ask you to agree to such an arrangement, but if it is your wish to correspond with him with that possibility in mind, you have my blessing. He has sent a letter for you. And a portrait." He reached into his pocket and withdrew a sealed letter and a miniature on a fine gold chain. "He seems an honorable and flexible sort of fellow. It might prove to be a suitable if unusual match, after all."

Alcy took the portrait and examined it closely. The man on it was young, his hair and skin golden, softened by a glow of light that made him look like a modern-day Adonis.

"He is very handsome," she said.

"Few in England know of him, but those who do speak highly of him," her father said.

Alcy glanced out the wide bow window of the dining room, where only the empty kerb showed the place where Ezekiel’s hack had been. She reached for the letter. "Half of my dowry is to be a bridal portion, set aside in my name only to be used at my sole discretion."

Her father raised an eyebrow. "Your contributions to the new machine designs have certainly earned you the right to say how your dowry is to be divided."

Alcy turned the letter so that she could read the direction. The handwriting was elegant, the paper of a fine quality. Impoverished he might be, she decided, but he was proud. "I think I will write him," she said slowly, staring at the letter. "If he is a man of honor, and of kindness and of sufficient sentiment, then I think that this arrangement might, indeed, workout well for us all."

After all, she thought with one final look out of the window, I have no hopes in England. There, at least, with my own money in my own name, I might have a chance to be free.


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Tantalizing, spellbinding, sizzling and captivating, this novel lures readers into its depths, making them never want to leave. Joyce hones her skills as an erotic romance author of the finest caliber in a tale as dark and seductive as rich, decadent chocolate. VERY SENSUAL

— Kathe Robins of
Romantic Times BOOKclub, Top Pick

Ms. Joyce takes [a classic romance] theme and places it in exotic locales…. It makes for a fun and interesting change of pace. Readers who enjoy exotic locales will want to check out this dramatic story.

— Lisa Baca of Romance Reviews Today

Difficult to pick apart and analyze Joyce’s book(s). I struggled to find even these words. Easier for me to just say that she delivers a sensory experience for the reader—something we crave.

— Jennifer B. of Don't Talk Just Read

Besides bringing to life the Ottoman Empire as a delightful side benefit, WHISPERS OF THE NIGHT is a superb historical romance that hooks the audience from the moment they arrive at remote Castle Vlararchia in Romania and never slows down as they flee Istanbul's Topkapi Palace. The strong story line contains dark gothic elements that turn into a deep abiding passion and love. Fans who value exotic locales away from the genre's norm will fully want to join the charming lead couple as they learn first hand with their lives at stake the Machiavellian principles that rule Eastern Europe.

— Harriet Klausner

This tale is a magical ride that takes you along with Alcy and Dimitru, not just through the Romanian Forests, but through the self discovery each make within themselves. It doesn't get much better than this, and I anxiously await the next ride Lydia Joyce conjures for her readers to take!

— Deana Monteleone for Romance Reader at Heart (Keeper Review)

I thought this was a wonderful book. In addition to all the above, we get a fascinating, extremely original setting (Romania and the Ottoman Empire in the 19th century? That's not to be seen in your regular romance!) and beautiful writing. I can't wait for the next book!

— Rosario's Reading Journal

 

RT Reviewer's Choice Award Nominee
RT Top Pick
RT Runner Up Best Sensual Historical Romance

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